ahm
critique= its too fast and short
ahm
critique= its too fast and short
it'll be slow and a bit longer.
not bad
add sounds it will help your animation and do more make more frames
i need to know how to add music and sound
well
nice and short plot, good use of limited animation style
problems= the drawing, the graphics and i wanted more, Hey make it longer
By the way nice Music
thank you but thats my syle but if it becoms a problem with a lot of pepol ill chang
not bad
i think it was too short thought man
Thanks much for giving your opinion.
critique
some areas of the images/graphics could have been used a little blurring eg the line in the road HOWEVER good work man
I would love the blurring feature. But sadly I only have MX so I have to do without. Thank you though.
well well
good choice of music nice and short animation the plot was there i love your work mostly the drawings
thanks, afrodale and spartahog
well
the animation could have been better
use the onion skin tool next time
and dude why is the size of the stage so big ?
improve on your animation it has potential
I import pivot onto flash but the width and height is too big. I make it smaller but when i put it on newgrounds, it gets messed up. I'll try again though.
wow!!!!
that was really short were is the plot on the animation
Make it longer it was too short for me to see the joke man
THANKS FOR THE REVIEW! Well no plot at all, and was short because it wasn't a planned animation; I just wanted to make something for an old friend of mine, with working buttons. So anyway, thanks!
that was good
man that was good but its too fast to read and it finished too quick (i want more)
the music was excellent Man work on it and re submit it u can get a from page if u rework it a little good stuff man good stuff
use the pause button
criticisms
were is the plot ?
it gets boring after watching this animation for a while seeing the same thing
good graphics anyway
I think I pulled my smile off very well!
I am Dale
Age 37, Male
Artist
Edna Manley College
jamaica
Joined on 8/9/08